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Post by ~{KiaOfTheSand}~ on Jun 23, 2009 22:06:16 GMT -5
A thick blanket lays across my mind, A shadow of discontent. And with each passing moment, by-and-by, It gains substance I never meant.
Though I will leave soon, This place will haunt me, The good and the bad, The ones who did taunt me,
And each afternoon I will think and think, And my mind will be fuzzy as if it were drink, And my heart will grow hollow and evil thoughts reign, Until I remember the times that it sang...
For certain thoughts of people fill me with delight, And happily it drives away the shadows of the night, That invade my dreams and plant the seeds, That sprout and grow at noon, Only to be vanquished, by that certain special You.
Love~
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I own and claim this poem, for I have created it. Any stealing, and I swear to God, I truly do, I'll find out and track you down with vengeance, even employing Hawlin if I have to. Other people, keep an eye out for it.
I'll leave you to decide whether or not 'Love~' is part of the poem, or an extra, a key to unlock certain pieces of it. Geez, write one poem and my poet muse attacks everything I say. ^_^
Just something I whipped up. But I really love, perhaps more than any other poem I've written. It has rhymes! And they work! Usually my poems are freehand kind of things. It reminds me of Pierceland...
^_^ -Kiariana, Tori No Kurosuna
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Post by ϟShadowϟ on Jun 24, 2009 12:29:59 GMT -5
Nice, I like it. =3 It's sort of dark but not cynical, rhymes are always nice, and it lets the reader think and interpret it themselves. Altogether, a lovely poem Kia. ^^
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Post by ~{KiaOfTheSand}~ on Jun 24, 2009 13:31:57 GMT -5
Thank you~ ^_^ It's awesome to hear your take on it.
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