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Post by Short Stuff on Jun 22, 2009 8:15:30 GMT -5
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Post by ~{KiaOfTheSand}~ on Jun 22, 2009 11:04:31 GMT -5
-_- First off- roleplay example. Second off- you were supposed to write OUTSIDE of the bold. I fixed that for you. Third- What aspect of nature does she control? There's lots of nature and lots of different types. Does she control earth, plants, etc. Flesh it out, explain it. Spend time on it. Good bios can take a while. Also, don't use '@' in your sentences. BAD. You're trying to be accepted into a roleplay. NO CHATSPEAK ALLOWED.
Fix that up and it'll be acceptable. ^_^
P.S. Your white tiger photo was deleted from photobucket. You'll have to find a new one.
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Post by Short Stuff on Jun 22, 2009 11:52:46 GMT -5
thank you kia
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Post by ~{KiaOfTheSand}~ on Jun 22, 2009 20:59:50 GMT -5
Somebody gag me. *sigh* It'll have to do. i suppose you can't do much better than that. I'm skeptical of letting you give your character power like that but I suppose I'll give it a shot. *long sigh* Accepted
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