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Post by Short Stuff on Jun 15, 2009 7:44:01 GMT -5
My Vampire Character Online Name: Short Stuff Character's name: Abbra Human or Vamp: vamp Age(Physical Appearance): 15 Age(Actual Age): 21 Gender: female Sexuality: bisexual Personality:See History Appearance: Nefertiti1.deviantart.com/art/vampire-14079783(does not have symbol on her face) A small stature at about 5 foot four with long, flowing curly blond hair. Looks like she is unable to hold her own in fight. History: Was bit five years ago and is now one of the strongest vampires in her coven. She can't remember what or who bit her and loves tom take on fights with people bigger than her. Role-Play Example: She threw herself silently at the helpless human, opening her mouth and snapping it's head so that it didn't feel pain. She put her lips to it's neck and tasted the blood, closing her eyes approvingly as she gulped it down.
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Post by ~{KiaOfTheSand}~ on Jun 21, 2009 21:58:19 GMT -5
Personality needs to be filled out. ^_^
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Post by Short Stuff on Jun 22, 2009 12:02:21 GMT -5
sorry
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Post by ~{KiaOfTheSand}~ on Jun 22, 2009 21:04:22 GMT -5
That isn't good enough, Dami. You need to fill it out. Making a bio takes TIME. Her history says nothing about her personality. Your roleplay is at the best you can get it, I suppose, so that's fine. Just take some time. Fill stuff out. Think carefully about everything. I've gone over bios multiple times and I'm not even all that good.
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