Post by damipere on May 4, 2009 19:45:16 GMT -5
I wrote this story for an assighnment in class this is the short versoin please leave some constructive critisim
Midnight
By Damian Perepelitza
CHAPTER 1
Vampires and werewolves should never mix. At least this is what i thought before I met Christie we had never ever thought what happened could be possible but then it happened.
CHAPTER 2
It was a cold snowy evening in the dreary town of Erskrine. I was about to go and tear the vampires from our territory. They were breaking the ancient promise by going through our land to hunt and it made us mad. As I was sneaking to attack them from behind I saw a vampire that I just knew would be an easy kill, so I leapt from the darkness of midnight. I jumped straight onto her body and pinned her straight to the ground. As I tried to bite her neck she shoved me off of her and got up in a fighting stance. She hissed at me warningly as to say I'm going to kill you. Then I leapt again. I missed but she tore off part of my foot as she bit it . Howling in pain I went again and pinned her she struggled but was unable to get free as I was about to go for the killing bite she muttered “stop” her word losing emphasis. Again she struggled “why can’t we be friends”? She had a point we had been fighting for about a century I think it was time to make peace.
“How would we do it” I asked deeply in thought.
“We could go and see each other secretly and eventually find a way to tell the others’’.
Ok then she wanted to be with me. If we were to get together then we could save both of our types and ourselves. We would be heros.
“fine. We should meet by the old hollow tree where we are able to stay protected and unseen, is that Ok with you?.
“ I was going to say the same thing why don’t we meet at midnight tomorrow”?
Thoughts ran through my head about that, we could be caught sneaking away from the main crowd, or even in the hiding place. This could be dangerous and we could be put to death but in order to save us before we go extinct fighting each other. It was also the best time to sneak away because that was when everybody left the houses to hunt. After I thought about this for about a minute and then immediately answered “its the best time to leave so why not. Lets do this.
The next night we met together and started getting to know each other, she is a nineteen year old vampire and was bit at the age of four her name was Christie and she was already in love with me when we started to fight for the death. I told her that I was a twenty year old werewolf and that my name was James and that I thought she was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. Well one thing let to another and in two weeks I found out that I was going to be a father.
* * * * * * * *
“How? What will they look like? Your having triplets and we aren’t going to tell them they are going to notice your pregnant soon”.
“They will find out because we are going to tell them. All of them at once. We are living proof that our species can live together in harmony. Under the promise two adults of the different types are able to call a meeting of us all so that is what we will do. We will tell them that I am pregnant with your children and that if we can get along then they can as well. If they exile us we will just move somewhere else, if they don’t we can start a new promise called the promise of peace and we as a whole will live in peace This is how we will either be put to death, be exiled, or live in harmony with each other”.
This must be how she sees it so “when”? I asked again leaving her in charge.
“When I am four months pregnant I will be fairly so we will do it then”.
I then thought about how she will look and started to think of names for the kids and ended up realizing that if this doesn’t work we wont be able to give them a good life.
* * * * * * * * * * * *
“Fine so tomorrow we will announce this to our peoples and then we will hold it in the ancient field where the promise was written”, I asked to make sure that this is what Christie wanted.
“yes”.
That was all she said before she fell asleep on my lap in the old willow.
Chapter 3
The next day we each talked to our people and called a meeting in the ancient field. “Many of you are wondering why we called a meeting today. Well we called this meeting because we found out that sworn enemies are able to live in harmony for months Christie and I have been seeing each other behind your backs at midnight every night. She is now pregnant with my babies as you can tell. We are leaving the choice up to you for what to do we could live with each other in harmony you could exile us before of after the babies are born or you could kill us. Your choice what will you do”? I was very nervous about my fate as Christie started to say “We have decided for you all to vote this is James and my decision so please respect it.
The vote ended in the fate of us being exiled. we had to be gone out of the territories in four days and we were unable to talk to any one. So this is how it would end, us gone and nowhere to go we will have to fight for our own land and we have to take care of our children that we know nothing about. Basically we are dead.
Midnight
By Damian Perepelitza
CHAPTER 1
Vampires and werewolves should never mix. At least this is what i thought before I met Christie we had never ever thought what happened could be possible but then it happened.
CHAPTER 2
It was a cold snowy evening in the dreary town of Erskrine. I was about to go and tear the vampires from our territory. They were breaking the ancient promise by going through our land to hunt and it made us mad. As I was sneaking to attack them from behind I saw a vampire that I just knew would be an easy kill, so I leapt from the darkness of midnight. I jumped straight onto her body and pinned her straight to the ground. As I tried to bite her neck she shoved me off of her and got up in a fighting stance. She hissed at me warningly as to say I'm going to kill you. Then I leapt again. I missed but she tore off part of my foot as she bit it . Howling in pain I went again and pinned her she struggled but was unable to get free as I was about to go for the killing bite she muttered “stop” her word losing emphasis. Again she struggled “why can’t we be friends”? She had a point we had been fighting for about a century I think it was time to make peace.
“How would we do it” I asked deeply in thought.
“We could go and see each other secretly and eventually find a way to tell the others’’.
Ok then she wanted to be with me. If we were to get together then we could save both of our types and ourselves. We would be heros.
“fine. We should meet by the old hollow tree where we are able to stay protected and unseen, is that Ok with you?.
“ I was going to say the same thing why don’t we meet at midnight tomorrow”?
Thoughts ran through my head about that, we could be caught sneaking away from the main crowd, or even in the hiding place. This could be dangerous and we could be put to death but in order to save us before we go extinct fighting each other. It was also the best time to sneak away because that was when everybody left the houses to hunt. After I thought about this for about a minute and then immediately answered “its the best time to leave so why not. Lets do this.
The next night we met together and started getting to know each other, she is a nineteen year old vampire and was bit at the age of four her name was Christie and she was already in love with me when we started to fight for the death. I told her that I was a twenty year old werewolf and that my name was James and that I thought she was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. Well one thing let to another and in two weeks I found out that I was going to be a father.
* * * * * * * *
“How? What will they look like? Your having triplets and we aren’t going to tell them they are going to notice your pregnant soon”.
“They will find out because we are going to tell them. All of them at once. We are living proof that our species can live together in harmony. Under the promise two adults of the different types are able to call a meeting of us all so that is what we will do. We will tell them that I am pregnant with your children and that if we can get along then they can as well. If they exile us we will just move somewhere else, if they don’t we can start a new promise called the promise of peace and we as a whole will live in peace This is how we will either be put to death, be exiled, or live in harmony with each other”.
This must be how she sees it so “when”? I asked again leaving her in charge.
“When I am four months pregnant I will be fairly so we will do it then”.
I then thought about how she will look and started to think of names for the kids and ended up realizing that if this doesn’t work we wont be able to give them a good life.
* * * * * * * * * * * *
“Fine so tomorrow we will announce this to our peoples and then we will hold it in the ancient field where the promise was written”, I asked to make sure that this is what Christie wanted.
“yes”.
That was all she said before she fell asleep on my lap in the old willow.
Chapter 3
The next day we each talked to our people and called a meeting in the ancient field. “Many of you are wondering why we called a meeting today. Well we called this meeting because we found out that sworn enemies are able to live in harmony for months Christie and I have been seeing each other behind your backs at midnight every night. She is now pregnant with my babies as you can tell. We are leaving the choice up to you for what to do we could live with each other in harmony you could exile us before of after the babies are born or you could kill us. Your choice what will you do”? I was very nervous about my fate as Christie started to say “We have decided for you all to vote this is James and my decision so please respect it.
The vote ended in the fate of us being exiled. we had to be gone out of the territories in four days and we were unable to talk to any one. So this is how it would end, us gone and nowhere to go we will have to fight for our own land and we have to take care of our children that we know nothing about. Basically we are dead.